As the season changes our love matures
his hands become more tense and kisses more dense
the feeling has no boundaries
as it is new n happy sensation
doubts get easily solved
and fights are all easily resolved
because the state of emotions mature
we stay together for longer durations
in each others embrace as we stay
we stay liplocked for hours together
our love matures as we stay
physical attractions becomes irrelevant
what matters is love and trust
for trust develops as we stay together
for love matures as we stay
ideas and thoughts are understood UnSaId
for the love matures as we stay
with eyes everything can be left UnSaId
with eyes everything seems already SAID
for patience and beliefs can be left UnSaId
as the yes say it all
as the season change our love matures
as the love matures as we stay
10 comments:
How wondeful and heavenln two lovers reach that stae..I mean the level of maturity in the relationship...when no words are needed...its the eyes that talk..
Wonderfuly written..You are so good Gagan:)
I've read this poem so many times..and each ime i read it, it leads me to a different world..
The simplicity of words and expression is making it very strong and effective.
Sincerely speaking, its a mesmerising piece to read for..
I am sure you will reach excellence as a poet, cos not only you have interst but ability to appreciate emotions closely with proper understanding!
Its a rare quality sister..
I wish you all the best with ur foray in creativity :)
amazin.. i think i have readthis before once..
puttin forward the idea thru complicated words is easy.. but u r just simple and thats simply amazin.. and to tell u the truth.. just readin ur poem made my heart lighter ...
.. this is somethin that is a really personal feelin u have put in with surprising ease and simplicity. hats off to u madame.
beautiful poem gagandeep...its awsum....i never knew u were such a gud poet durin skool times...
Beautiful...thts the word which comes to my mind after reading the poem. nice blog...hope u update soon
Hi Gagandeep,
So beautiful. :-)..............
Love and trust is all that is needed. No barriers, no boundaries, no misunderstanding........ nothing can tear you apart..........
Keep blogging.......
Cheers!!
Vivek :-)....................
amaizing awesome.....after reading it .... i feel its not the words u have written but ur feelings towards LOVE and LOVERS...m actually running short of words to express/explain how gud and g8tly u have written.....
....BaBu
U create a blog to remain regular poster .....................
wow..tht was beautiful
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